25.07.2007, 03:56
Chose promise, chose due : voilà le texte tel qu'il se tient à l'heure actuelle, avec la traduction anglaise.
Pour ne pas faire dériver ce sujet, j'invite cependant les membres à poster leurs commentaires grammatico-vocabularistiques sur Elfling : Akallabêth - Atalantë. La traduction y est également bien plus détaillée, les néologismes y sont mis en évidence (et discutés), etc.
NB : Cette version est ultérieure à celle postée sur Elfling, sachant que j'y ai intégré un certain nombre de commentaires qui furent fait par un certain HKF.
Ceci dit, je me demande : peut-on / doit-on élider une voyelle longue ? Les exemples dont je me souviens (tenn' Ambar-metta; lumenn' omentielvo) concernent uniquement des voyelles courtes.
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It is said by the Eldar that Men came into the world in the time of the Shadow of Morgoth, and they fell swiftly under his dominion;
Quenta lo Eldai i Atani túler mir Ardá i lúmessë i Moringottova Huineo, ar larcavë lantaneltë nu túreryá;
for he sent his emissaries among them, and they listened to his evil and cunning words, and they worshipped the Darkness and yet feared it.
an lentanes tercánoryar imíca té, ar lastaneltë ulcai ar curwinai quettaryain, ar laitaneltë Mornié ananta runceltë sallo.
But there were some that turned from evil and left the lands of their kindred, and wandered ever westward;
Mal enger quen’ i auquerner intë ulcallo ar oanter i nostalelto nórí, ar voro ranyaner númenna;
for they had heard a rumour that in the West there was a light which the Shadow could not dim.
an ahlárienelt' enequessi' i Númendë táss' engë cala ya Huinë úpollë morita.
The servants of Morgoth pursued them with hatred, and their ways were long and hard;
I Moringotto núror roitaner té teviénen , ar tieltar andai ar sardai;
yet they came at last to the lands that look upon the Sea, and they entered Beleriand in the days of the War of the Jewels.
ananta túleltë teldavë i nórinnar yar cenar Eäré, ar mittaneltë Hecelmar auressen i Ohto Ñoldomírion.
Pour ne pas faire dériver ce sujet, j'invite cependant les membres à poster leurs commentaires grammatico-vocabularistiques sur Elfling : Akallabêth - Atalantë. La traduction y est également bien plus détaillée, les néologismes y sont mis en évidence (et discutés), etc.
NB : Cette version est ultérieure à celle postée sur Elfling, sachant que j'y ai intégré un certain nombre de commentaires qui furent fait par un certain HKF.
Ceci dit, je me demande : peut-on / doit-on élider une voyelle longue ? Les exemples dont je me souviens (tenn' Ambar-metta; lumenn' omentielvo) concernent uniquement des voyelles courtes.
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It is said by the Eldar that Men came into the world in the time of the Shadow of Morgoth, and they fell swiftly under his dominion;
Quenta lo Eldai i Atani túler mir Ardá i lúmessë i Moringottova Huineo, ar larcavë lantaneltë nu túreryá;
for he sent his emissaries among them, and they listened to his evil and cunning words, and they worshipped the Darkness and yet feared it.
an lentanes tercánoryar imíca té, ar lastaneltë ulcai ar curwinai quettaryain, ar laitaneltë Mornié ananta runceltë sallo.
But there were some that turned from evil and left the lands of their kindred, and wandered ever westward;
Mal enger quen’ i auquerner intë ulcallo ar oanter i nostalelto nórí, ar voro ranyaner númenna;
for they had heard a rumour that in the West there was a light which the Shadow could not dim.
an ahlárienelt' enequessi' i Númendë táss' engë cala ya Huinë úpollë morita.
The servants of Morgoth pursued them with hatred, and their ways were long and hard;
I Moringotto núror roitaner té teviénen , ar tieltar andai ar sardai;
yet they came at last to the lands that look upon the Sea, and they entered Beleriand in the days of the War of the Jewels.
ananta túleltë teldavë i nórinnar yar cenar Eäré, ar mittaneltë Hecelmar auressen i Ohto Ñoldomírion.
Rollant est proz e Oliver est sage.
Ambedui unt merveillus vasselage :
Puis que il sunt as chevals e as armes,
Ja pur murir n’eschiverunt bataille.
— La Chanson de Roland
Ambedui unt merveillus vasselage :
Puis que il sunt as chevals e as armes,
Ja pur murir n’eschiverunt bataille.
— La Chanson de Roland